Sina and the eel writing.

 

WALT: describe people, places and things
Remember to:
Use vivid adjectives
Use similes, metaphors and hyperboles (exaggerated statements) 
Use emotive language (words and phrases that make the reader feel strongly)

Sina
Long soft, hazelnut brown hair swayed in the wind. Her chocolate brown eyes sparked in the morning sun, her teeth sparkled like half melted ice. 
The Eel
The shiny wet slime glistening in the sun. His big gray eyes popped curly. His short thin tail flapped  back and forth slowly.
The coconut tree and nut
At the speed to light the small coconut fell from the tall coconut tree, it was as tall as a giraffe. As she held the hairy brown coconut the saw the two eyes and one mouth, if she pierced the mouth and drank the cool white milk, it would be like she is kissing the eel.
The setting - village or pool/river
The blue, green river sparkled in the moonlight. Trees swayed side to side in the cool wind, leafs fell off the tree and covered the bright green grass. Tiny droplets hit the grass silently shining in the wind.