Monday, 6 January 2020

My diary not really what happend! Inspired by Anne Frank! SUMMER LEARNING!

This is my diary and this thing did not happen I made it up!


Dear diary,when I was walking down the road I saw a pack of wolfs. When they noticed me they started chasing me, fast. I ran as fast as the wind but some how the wolfs still caught up to me, but if I look closely the shadow of the wolf terns into a cute little dog! How did I not notice that before that the wolfs ( not  ) were really... dogs!! Instead of running away from the dogs I ran towards them they were not mean all they wanted to do was play so I played with and even gave them food to eat. A few weeks had gone by I still feed them play sometimes camped outside with them but no one pick them up to take them home so I thought maybe I could take them home so is what I did. When I walked through the door way my mother and father were waiting for me they asked ''why did you come home some late''  ''well before I tell you that mum and dad'' I said '' guess what I got some new dogs from the road and they are nice but need some love'' my parents said that we could keep them. After we washed the dogs them their fur was chocolaty brown and they had dark brown eyes! I love my dogs a lot! THANK YOU DIARY FOR LISTENING TO ME!

What is your favourite type of animal!

1 comment:

  1. Tālofa Lava Salamasina,

    Well done on completing another blog post today for the Summer Learning Journey (SLJ). You are making such great progress, keep up the hard work. One more week to go!

    What a fantastic diary entry you have put together today. I really enjoyed reading your made up story about a day you running away from a pack of wolves that mysteriously changed into a cute little dog, how random!

    I like your story because, you have used a lot of adjectives - describing words and you have put a lot of detail into this piece of writing.

    What was the inspiration behind this diary entry, do you have any dogs of your own?

    Tofā,
    Kueni :)

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